Running absentmindedly up the cobblestone stairs, not quite knowing as to where I am going -- this place so unfamiliar. Opening a door to a closed off room a mustly smell overtakes me. Closing my eyes and reminicing of the days before I lie down on the overstuffed duvet and drift back off to sleep.
Tmae, I really enjoyed reading this. I also liked how you thought of the castle as a dream idea. (: GREAT JOB TMAE! :D
ReplyDeleteI liked this piece. It sure feels like something you could return to and add more. I really think you should consider it. Cute pic of you at Starbucks. So why didn't you bring me a grande soy chai latte? Well, whatever. jk
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good paragraph. I like how it's so descriptive of what a castle might be like. I don't see anything wrong with this piece.
ReplyDeleteTmae! I really liked this story. It really put me there. I also really LOVE your blog... I love the blog, music, pictures, slide show, and meez... It was amazing. I love it. Could you please show me how to do all of that to my blog! Thanks! Anyways great job on all of your writing pieces. You are great! :) ~Sammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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